Do not blame Author-san

Otaku February 28, 2021 3:51 pm

Don’t blame the Author since the story seems to be changing its pace. This last arc is not part of the original Novel. I frankly prefer the original but am waiting to see if this new storyline turns out to be better. My only problem is, some chapters are unnecessarily long and involve no movement forward, only endless explanatory dialogue.

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    Elil March 1, 2021 8:22 am

    Is that all though. I feel like the author is deliberately stretching the story. Like the scene where lucas offers to kill all the courtiers were repeated in two chapters. So many times you see authors getting stuck mid way through the story unable to think of a proper ending or even worse, start milking the story by just stretching it and killing development... maybe I'm just ranting but I feel like seasons 2 and 3 could actually be condensed into like 10 chapters at most.

    Otaku March 1, 2021 11:44 pm

    Well, none of this happens in the novel. This is probably the publishing company milking the success of the story. The Original 3rd arc was concentrated around Jannette’s powers and a delegation from the Kingdom that appears in Beware of the Brothers. Anastacius didn’t even show up in the original novel. Then there were the extra chapters. Those were pretty good too. Still, that’s not the Original Author’s fault. This is a new storyline, which is why the pace seems different. Every writer has a style and it shows when they add a story from someone else.