This is a bit confusing but good neitherless ? The first 11 chapters all happened within one day which seems... pretty unrealistic. So many things are happening at the same time,, it makes my brain hurt. Plus what's her plan ? Isn't she supposed to be a genius ? How could she see a dead body, and be totally calm/act as nothing happened a second after when it's her first time seeing one ? Why does she want to escape ? She's clever enough to find a solution in another way. Plus she JUST got reincarnated! Like, she got reincarnated the day of her 7th birthday, met her 4 possible dads, got kidnapped, changed, tried to escape, got involved in fights, went to the forest, found eggs, used their power, got kidnapped again.... Just. In. The. First. Day. Escaping that early is just suicide as well! I mean, yeah, she'll die at 12 so she has to be fast, but still! How is a 7 year-old little girl supposed to survive once outside ? At least take your time, take profit of the 5 YEARS you have to take knowledge pf your world and later be able to properly escape! She's annoying. And I don't like how she tried to make the knight eat dirt in the first chapter. Miss you're like almost 30.... that's not even funny. I felt bad for him. Not gonna talk about the moments where she was "SO" scared of the knight but didn't care when he carried her around, when she put a flower in his hair, ect. Just make up your mind already...
This is a bit confusing but good neitherless ?
The first 11 chapters all happened within one day which seems... pretty unrealistic. So many things are happening at the same time,, it makes my brain hurt. Plus what's her plan ? Isn't she supposed to be a genius ? How could she see a dead body, and be totally calm/act as nothing happened a second after when it's her first time seeing one ? Why does she want to escape ? She's clever enough to find a solution in another way. Plus she JUST got reincarnated! Like, she got reincarnated the day of her 7th birthday, met her 4 possible dads, got kidnapped, changed, tried to escape, got involved in fights, went to the forest, found eggs, used their power, got kidnapped again.... Just. In. The. First. Day.
Escaping that early is just suicide as well! I mean, yeah, she'll die at 12 so she has to be fast, but still! How is a 7 year-old little girl supposed to survive once outside ? At least take your time, take profit of the 5 YEARS you have to take knowledge pf your world and later be able to properly escape! She's annoying.
And I don't like how she tried to make the knight eat dirt in the first chapter. Miss you're like almost 30.... that's not even funny. I felt bad for him.
Not gonna talk about the moments where she was "SO" scared of the knight but didn't care when he carried her around, when she put a flower in his hair, ect. Just make up your mind already...