Not quite sure

Creamy_dreamer March 5, 2021 6:52 am

All in all it isn't bad. But it is already over 30 chps but no character development at all plus the chapters are short. You all pitying the FL I do too but I still think she could be a bit stronger looking back at her past to avoid the past to repeat...she is scared but didn't come up with any plans, that's just lame. And she's scared of that particular household so she should be able to step up and ask for help if she really wanna escape. I've read most stories with strong and blunt female leads and that might be why I expect her to be stronger

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    JulietClaire March 5, 2021 11:29 am

    Who could she ask for help in that household though? The maids obviously likes the count so thats a no go. Im not sure about the knight but he did kept an eye on her for the past 10 years in her last life so that is probably a no go. The ladies at teatime? They would probably assume she is just a delusional child.

    Creamy_dreamer March 9, 2021 8:49 am
    Who could she ask for help in that household though? The maids obviously likes the count so thats a no go. Im not sure about the knight but he did kept an eye on her for the past 10 years in her last life so th... JulietClaire

    Yes not probably from that damn household..but she could have look out for opportunities