omg i just realized that she really is a pick me girl when u said it huhu lmao i hate it
DWJDAJBW I THOUGHT IT WAS ONLY ME the second-hand embarrassment is so bad for me
This had a lot of potential honestly. But the flow (was too fast), dialogues (of for glob's sake), art (was good in close up but not overall), characterization (tried too hard but made it so generic and cliché), is so so bad.
Oh for glob's sake* #－.－)
I can't get past chapter 4 man ... it's seriously difficult to read this esp when fl UNIRONICALLY goes "I'll help you ! I can save you !" holy fuck it's so hard to read without cringing . she pulled a pick me girl going "guys guys stop ! :( look at me prince , this isn't the you I know and love :( what color is my hair :((" god I srsly can't with this ... and the beginning is wonky and even the development and dialogues ain't it . "hi I'm your tutor I can fix u !" and in the span of a whole four chapters she's alrdy tried to "save" him when she can't even do anything fr someone tell me this is a joke .. where's the slash j shawty