Damn that’s long....too long...btw that’s all freaking true that’s why I drop it cause it’s getting boring and boring.....i thought that the plot was gonna change but it didn’t...she’s still in love with him and I think she’s not gong to be in love with anybody else...I mean there is still guys that like her but she still wanna chose that man? That’s sucks...at least make it more happier and not gloomier....(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Damn that’s long....too long...btw that’s all freaking true that’s why I drop it cause it’s getting boring and boring.....i thought that the plot was gonna change but it didn’t...she’s still in love with him and I think she’s not gong to be in love with anybody else...I mean there is still guys that like her but she still wanna chose that man? That’s sucks...at least make it more happier and not gloomier....(╯°Д °)╯╧╧. If I was her I would find another man like gurl you deserve better
Wait no I take it back.....I read the second latest one and I be like WHUUUTTT you knew ur still in love with him but u rejected him...how dumb can that freaking be.....u know what..I think if she didn’t reject him she was going to be the empress or was it queen .....that’s freaking dumb (╬￣皿￣)
sorry if it's long, I just had to explain what I feel and think about the whole thing. she is in love with the prince cause...plot. that the only reason, there is nothing there for her to really love him for but the plot forces it cause..he is a prince ╮(￣▽￣)╭ and it feels so unrealistic.
again most of it is for plot reasons, there are no good reasons for her actions at this point so the plot making her be dumb. I guess the writing becomes worse than how it was ╮(￣▽￣)╭ no surprise but it is a shame.
Yeah though lol ╥﹏╥
now hear me out - we all very simple readers. and I do believe that most readers do not enjoy reading something they hate or do not ship. but when you start a story you do want to finish it and see how it ends. we do want to love the ML, we do want to root for FL and ML.
but in this story, the way it is built out the plot, the characters, the arcs, and the relationship. you just can't do it here, if some of you can well great for you but a lot of people don't like the ML and they have a good reason too - cause the plot is built this way!
when we first see the MC has readers we see her horrible past - nothing can delete or make us forgive what happens there! rape, the murder of her family and shit shaming her baby and let him die for another women's baby have no excuse or forgiveness no matter how the author will try to sugar it that this lifetime is different - the MC still remember her past.
so where this plot does work out - here shadow queen http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/shadow_queen/ almost the same plot, but here the story uses the past to move the plot.
another problem - the prince character is boring, cliche and there is nothing on him that feels human. he is just the typical boring prince with a bad childhood with daddy issues. but it does not make readers care about him, he does not even have that many problems or change that much. and the chemistry between the MC and prince is so flat, non-existent, and just again boring. there is no spark and it feel force so hard that it does not feel real. and when that happens, well, that what is called bad writing. you should never let the readers feel like it forces out, never.
and the last and bigger problem - the MC relationship with the other two guys Allendis or Carsein feels natural, they actually have much more chemistry with her and better at communicating with her than the prince ever was cause he is cliche. also they get the most screen time than any other character in this story other than her father!!!! HER GOD DAMN FATHER GET LESS SCREEN TIME THEN THEM!!
and if I start to talk about those two amazing development has characters and the way they grow from their old self I will need to start writing a whole book. so I just say their character development is great and way better than even Tia, the main character. especially Allendis growth - I love him. he feels human, he feels soo real, he has his issues, his pain but the way he deals with them is so interesting - his character is super interesting! cause he is not just the "good guy" or "bad guy". he is gray and tries his best to live and find something that will make him feel loved, but unlike the perfect prince, he is not perfect! that's the thing I love about him, he can be a jark but he also learns from his past mistakes. and yeah he is possessive but he still has a much more healthy relationship with Tia than the prince has with her. the prince literally gets Tia into a fucking mantel break down! yeas he did that even if he didn't know it will happen - he did know that Tia was afraid of him and still force her to talk about it! how is that ok?! and this is just one example of how unbalance the relationship of the prince and Tia feel in this story, unlike Tia and Allendis that have respect to each other and show so many times in the story that they care about each other. it's not only from Allen's end, Tia does not want to stay away from him and does not want to stop their relationship (her father try to force her to stop talking to him, see how she react to that bs)
now we all know who the story end game will end like so many isekai cliches out there, it's nothing new, nothing original and nothing that good. it just the safe cliche everyone knows. everyone wants the prince charming, not sure why it is a thing but in the case of this story, it is the worse ending and a waste of opportunity after building two amazing and great characters for Tia that can support her and help her grow much more than the prince ever was.
so to put it simply, it the writing and story building that just not build well to make us care for the prince, why would we care about the stereotype and flat character that does not feel real? I have zero sympathy or empathy for him and the story does not help to change that.
and for those who do like the prince - great for you! but I'm not and yeah people have any right to talk about what they don't like about this.