Had a nice start and a beatifull art, but this plot is going downhill. It already smells s...

SolracXV February 21, 2016 4:43 pm

Had a nice start and a beatifull art, but this plot is going downhill. It already smells shittier with each chapter.

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    Carmelazation March 4, 2017 8:20 am

    I just kind of gave up when I saw the massive exposition dump in chapter 27. This random girl is suddenly the grand daughter of a very influential politician, OUTTA NOWHERE! Then this random guy is a super awesome army trained ranger, also OUTTA NOWHERE.

    I mean, as characters they were so underdeveloped that it's nice we're knowing something about them now, but to see their character development just dumped onto a single chapter when they were left alone for 26 chapters kind of... implies lazy plot.