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Really? So you don't like realistic portrayals of couples? Is that why people like you always complain about others treating fiction as of it was almost real? Somehow I doubt that. Plus you obviously haven't read this story if you think that this story was full of doubts and insecurities and lack of confidence and trust. Because I saw the complete opposite of course. Trust is earned not given. People who think that it is given like you seem to do are a bit naive though I guess.
After reading it I would say... It was OK but I didn't liked it too much because in both couple... No confidence.. Doubts. . No trust... full of insecurities.. I know being in love makes you fill with insecurities but they were too much for me... But I think I liked 1st story a bit. Anyway thanks for your hard work