Hmm the story is okay there is major skipage that goes on but the concept isn't bad. I feel like the brother's major sister complex got tossed out at some point which ruined the story a bit for me because I don't like when things just get tossed out. Also the ending felt anticlimactic to me. ....it was like my first thought process actually happened. Which was isn't obvious he's going to be king...since king implies a man? But as I read I thought it would end up being the center character which is why it felt anticlimactic to me.
Hmm the story is okay there is major skipage that goes on but the concept isn't bad. I feel like the brother's major sister complex got tossed out at some point which ruined the story a bit for me because I don't like when things just get tossed out. Also the ending felt anticlimactic to me. ....it was like my first thought process actually happened. Which was isn't obvious he's going to be king...since king implies a man? But as I read I thought it would end up being the center character which is why it felt anticlimactic to me.