nope.

Anjinsan March 3, 2016 8:19 pm

maybe i'm in a bad mood tonight, because all the yaoi i've read seem shitty. even this one. the plot was so lacunar, rushed, and just so wrong...

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    -Vex April 24, 2016 3:34 am

    Well said (I'm also probably in a bad mood from reading so much shit). The character interactions and decision-making are just stupid....

    Look, I understand why Kyoto hates his brother. I think that premise to start off the story wasn't so bad (Especially the explanation, gave some sense that the mangaka knows how to tell an ok story). What made me annoyed are the butler's actions throughout this story. At no point did I feel any sense of "love" from him. Here, have a scenario: when Toudou came back (which if I read right, was literally half a year after Kyoto exposed everything), the reason for approaching was actually to help the young master. So fuck it, at no point did he even try to apologize for everything.

    But hey, we're suppose to believe that they're still deeply in love even when they've only known each other for so little. The brother forces him to have sex and then Toudou accepts it because "love"

    Bleh, I went on a rant here. I've just felt extremely frustrated by this mangaka. The stories I've read tonight from him/her have been so off-putting and arguably bad (And before you argue "yea but it's yaoi, more smut less story", it's not an excuse for shitty writing. There's good yaoi out there (Finder series and Kuroneko series to name a few) who does the job with good writing too).

    Arya July 16, 2016 4:23 pm
    Well said (I'm also probably in a bad mood from reading so much shit). The character interactions and decision-making are just stupid....Look, I understand why Kyoto hates his brother. I think that premise to s... -Vex

    Ah you said exactly what was going on in my head. Totally ruined my mood.