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Yeah, I agree with you that this entire story is stiff. The writing is fast and choppy, and the facial expressions don’t match what the characters are saying. I’m sure it’ll get better though
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Yeah, I agree with you that this entire story is stiff. The writing is fast and choppy, and the facial expressions don’t match what the characters are saying. I’m sure it’ll get better though
Was kind of shocked with the artstyle they choose..I like the promo one better cause they're expressive ya know and like they really pops out on the scenes,like it adds a glow in their character, while this new one is kind of a meh to me :/ like I don't know how to exactly say what I feel, like their kind of stiff yah know..
Also is it me or the story is getting way too fast and confusing like, the white haired guy said his guy friend was heartbroken cause of the fl but then the white haired man wants to date her?? Like wat about ur friend like wow bruh..l- and suddenly the female lead understands what he feels?? Like gurl its only been a day chill
(Also I respect those readers who likes this story and its artstyle, like its cool men, u do u, glad u can enjoy this,keep it up if u like it)