I was so disappointed after reading this I thought this will be a goo read since many have been saying and recommending this to me, i hate how the fl resolved on defiling her fate was so easily shunned.
You do that that the author is a kid right?? I'm sorry I agree that stories that involve trauma like that need to be handled extremely delicately but criticizing like this I'm sorry its just...
. Your creating trauma.. your giving an aspiring team of creative people tryn to create a story they love or want to share with others so much effing hate.
For something that well I admit not handled in the best way, ws definitely not done on purpose. Its just sad tht it is some dont always understand exspecially new writers wht kind of power they weld and tht what they write has a message. Even when you just started this as just a fun romance novel.
But I am fucking tried of petty ass moherds fcker wanting to hate spew fck ahit and DEATH THREATs at someone who just wanted to write a story. What yr doing I understand it's not ok to sympathize abuse make it ok but we also have to understand that these things can be unattenchal. This isnt some 40 something white dude writing this whole propaganda shti saying MAUH HA HA!! Its a person a real life person a gifted one on tht, for having the courage and strength to write and create your own world give life to these fictional creatures made entirely of your imagination is a skill tht none of y trolls actually appreciate or seem to understand the hardwork and dedication tht goes in this.
Just tht it's ok to speak shit abt it and write death threats curse thm and ranting wht trash.
To a writer, a story even if started out as just a fun little something grows to be thier child. A child that gets more complex, made entirely from their deepest Hope's desires fears emotions all poured out bear for millions to view with the hope that they will find joy in it and love.
uhm lol go to talk to the person that sent death threats, tia hoesntly worst character ever made, like getting over ur traumu by being together with person that caused it or looked it the person that caused it(cause keep people saying its not the same ruve trash) such a disaapointing story glad its done so i dont see it updated on my latest update
totally agree, people that need an example of how NOT to write a good story should read this story. but not those who look for a good writing story.
You see the problem with these type of stories where the protagonist goes back to the past and in the end, still ends up with her past abuser with the excuse of "he's changed, he's not the same person as he was in the past" is that it romanticizes past trauma, toxic relationships, and abusive behavior which is not and will never be a good reading material. Your pain or even a drug, although explains it, is never an excuse to abuse another. Moreover, the characters don't feel real at all, they just serve as a plot device so the audience's sympathy would fall on the female protagonist. Having side characters as a plot device isn't a bad thing yes but your main cast shouldn't just serve as some plot device, sadly in this case, they do.
While we don't blame the characters for turning into what they are, it is ultimately the author's fault. Stories involving emotional abuse and healing over it takes a lot of emotional maturity. As a writer, you have the responsibility to take proper care of the themes you want to portray in order to not send the wrong message to your audience. Stories shape worldviews, folks.
So I caution you, only read this if you want an example of what bad writing is, how some things have the tendency to be romanticized, how the characters only serve as a plot device for the protagonist, and how the author failed to deliver her story's chosen themes properly.