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Pray two face beast bastard, making a scene that he can take advantage and then become an angel making a heroine attitude (stealing his friend ex bf with a chance to get back to each other *jamil and jan*)
Ps. I was so angry that i typed the wrong name
How can i unread this? This is not an awesome story i scanned every page, the plot is so fast, the emotion was there but it was a mix (like a crazy person, happy then suddenly it was a crying scene and then love scene and then doubting, example yourself laughing then crying without any reason that was i feel while scanning) i'm sorry to the author. You made a character jamil then made pray, set aside jamil so you can touch the heart of people (you're wrong) make it like a love triangle then turned it to a 3P, i love 3P but this kind of story is kinda mess and a no no no for me. And i think the wrong one is jan, jamil gave him everything, to make him secure, then he started spouting bullshit. And then jamil walked out, boi you should've stay with him (well he was, he always checks on jan, then pray as a beast sneaked and fucked his friend ex bf while knowing his friend is in love and clearly jan wanted to get back to jamil) What a sneaky bastard. Recommended not to read i pointed out everything i find uncomfortable and kinda trash.
A love story become a love triangle and then 3P
Jan as a doubting selfish bitch
Jamil as a beast has a short patience when they broke up( well it's normal but they had a chance but pray stole jan)
Jan two face beast bastard, making a scene that he can take advantage and then become an angel making a heroine attitude (stealing his friend ex bf with a chance to get back to each other *jamil and jan*)
So yeah i really wanted to share that, my english is not good but i hope you understand what i'm pointing off so i can breath tonight and sleep..