Flow of the story

JustEmber April 14, 2021 6:59 am

I love the story so far. My only gripe would be the first few chapters. Their attraction to each other felt too rushed.
The princess's fascination was understandable, Kuhn was the only one who treated her like a human instead of a god. But why was he suddenly attracted to her?? It didn't make much sense.
I almost dropped it at first because that fact annoyed me.

Responses
    Millie April 17, 2021 4:27 am

    I think he’s attracted to her because despite being naive, she is insanely smart. I think what drew him to her was her wit

    maychan April 19, 2021 11:11 am

    I mean what is there not attract about her? she is beautiful, smart, ready to change, learn from her mistakes, kind to her people etc...I be surpise if man didn't fall in love with this women!

    PrincessMoonlight April 19, 2021 12:21 pm

    Persoanlly I really like that it was rushed. I had or have been reading way to many slow burners and it just gets annoying with time. I am a hopeless romantic person and when I saw my now currently boyfriend for the first time. We also shared are first kiss on that same day. I don’t regret it at all. We have been dating for a long time now. And I feel when the attraction for both parties is already there, why deny it ? It’s just no point. It will only cause pain for both of them.