I kinda wanted this to be twisted, not to be too critical, but i feel like the second chapter was at a different place than the end of the first chapter. I felt like I'd skipped a bunch of important pages or something. There wasn't enough development between the slightly-twisted beginning and the fluffy-end.
To be honest, I was kinda hoping for a fucked up master-slaveish relationship. Overall, this was pretty anticlimactic. Not bad, but not something I'd follow.
I kinda wanted this to be twisted, not to be too critical, but i feel like the second chapter was at a different place than the end of the first chapter. I felt like I'd skipped a bunch of important pages or something. There wasn't enough development between the slightly-twisted beginning and the fluffy-end.
To be honest, I was kinda hoping for a fucked up master-slaveish relationship. Overall, this was pretty anticlimactic. Not bad, but not something I'd follow.