Hmm, I don't know how to feel about this

Azuis April 30, 2021 4:54 pm

I literally don't know how to feel about this. The vibe was pretty nice once season 2 started and the baby is cute. But I feel conflicted of the main couple. Just my opinion but they're both toxic as fuck. The seme is, yes, a r4p3st, pretty toxic in the beginning but I also hate how the uke acted. It would've been atleast good if he just looked at the baby's face for once before deciding to run away for 2 months, abandoning the child who need to the person who gave birth to him more. Props to the seme for changing his ways though, I would've wanted to sock him in the balls if he didn't. The uke's character development was also nice. BUT. I don't know, this story just doesn’t click to me but it was nice reading it.

Responses
    FBI April 30, 2021 6:27 pm

    HEY STOP. SAY NO MORE. I KNOW WHAT U MEAN and everyone else does as well and those that are in denial as well. This story is not cohesive and sex and rape is used as a glue to fix every solution and this whole story, pages and pages are stuck and sowed together with this type of "glue"

    FBI April 30, 2021 6:30 pm
    HEY STOP. SAY NO MORE. I KNOW WHAT U MEAN and everyone else does as well and those that are in denial as well. This story is not cohesive and sex and rape is used as a glue to fix every solution and this whole ... FBI

    ps many problems are very much half assed as well. so this "glue" aint that very sticky and pages are falling off
    (translation: the plot is sustained with sex and and thus never fixing the argument efficiently and the author jumps to one couple to other like nothing).

    Azuis April 30, 2021 11:44 pm
    ps many problems are very much half assed as well. so this "glue" aint that very sticky and pages are falling off (translation: the plot is sustained with sex and and thus never fixing the argument efficiently ... FBI

    I had to skip through a lot of pages. This really just doesn’t click to me. It was nice that they had rebuilt their relationship but in the end, its just.... How do I say this? Instead of love, its more like instincts. The world building is shit too because instead of making a different time where omegas where protected, they decided that it would be better if the world was identical to this world which is shit because women are already opressed in this time, adding omegas, I should've expected it to be like this.

    Azuis April 30, 2021 11:51 pm
    ps many problems are very much half assed as well. so this "glue" aint that very sticky and pages are falling off (translation: the plot is sustained with sex and and thus never fixing the argument efficiently ... FBI

    The problem is that this would be more interesting if the rape was not made and the omega was really more compatible with the alpha. Cause I've been looking at their chemistry and I say that its really not compatible. I'm not blaming just the seme but both of them for their really bad character development. It was in some way really really irritating as I progressed reading, there so many plot holes and everyone keeps denying that these two are not stable to be in a relationship. I dunno, its really not my type even the omega's personality. The seme's personality was fine minus his instincts and I also think they both need therapy.

    FBI May 1, 2021 12:13 am
    The problem is that this would be more interesting if the rape was not made and the omega was really more compatible with the alpha. Cause I've been looking at their chemistry and I say that its really not comp... Azuis

    lets just throw everyone in therapy tbh except Dojin's beta bandmate and his bro.
    at this point i feel like yaoi authors have a kink with people in need for therapy.

    Azuis May 1, 2021 12:46 am
    lets just throw everyone in therapy tbh except Dojin's beta bandmate and his bro.at this point i feel like yaoi authors have a kink with people in need for therapy. FBI

    At this point, I don't even care anymore. I'll just grow mushrooms in the corner as I try to find a Bl story that has no r4p3/SA