My thoughts on this story

Ines_Ivy April 30, 2021 7:54 pm

This is really messy story!
The plot and the characters are all over the place. And why isn't this tagged as romance when MC has a girlfriend?
I dont know if its cause the plot is so hurried so the characters arent that well established or cause MC isnt my favorite but this story is too fast to follow properly. "Funny" moments that some stories have to relive the pressure are non-existant here so all this story is about is fighting scenes.
Its like Yaoi with no plot but replace Smut with Action scenes where OP main character is never in danger cause we know he is OP.
It had potential but i dont really like anything in this story until now. Nothing im attached to that makes me wanna stay. Absolutly nothing.

I suggest to author to read "SSS-Class suicide Hunter", "Villain initialization" and "ranker who lives second life" or even "omniscient reader's viewpoint" to see how to intruduce characters properly. Cause this aint it.

(Sorry for harsh judging but i expected more since this was reccomended to me so much times)

5/10

Responses
    Bugs May 5, 2021 7:37 pm

    Because he doesn’t spend any time with her at like all, shut he doesn’t even like admitting he has a girl friend

    Ines_Ivy May 5, 2021 10:06 pm
    Because he doesn’t spend any time with her at like all, shut he doesn’t even like admitting he has a girl friend Bugs

    Then the point of her being in this story is?

    Bugs May 6, 2021 6:59 pm
    Then the point of her being in this story is? Ines_Ivy

    Nothing she’s just there to act as the last straw before it’s called a harem with all these girls simping for him

    Ines_Ivy May 6, 2021 7:07 pm
    Nothing she’s just there to act as the last straw before it’s called a harem with all these girls simping for him Bugs

    Totally dropping this lol