To be honest i think this story sucked. Don't get me wrong i loved the sex and stuff but i...

BlackWolf(^o^)/ May 6, 2016 1:40 pm

To be honest i think this story sucked. Don't get me wrong i loved the sex and stuff but i don't think he should have ended with up the doctor. I feel like this story is missing something.

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    Anonymous May 6, 2016 2:58 pm

    ...Like an extra chapter between 4 and 5 lol. All of a sudden Tomoya is agitated (he was fine after the 3some in chapter 4) over Keigo as if he had been rejected (this is before it became official)

    BlackWolf(^o^)/ May 6, 2016 3:03 pm

    Yeah thats whats missing