I feel like there's a lot of info dump in the first chapters so it's a bit tiring to read....

SuouNono May 6, 2021 1:33 pm

I feel like there's a lot of info dump in the first chapters so it's a bit tiring to read. Also, I'm not sure of it's because of the translation or just the way the artist organized it, it's very messy. I get why people can get confused. Though I'm able to understand it, the plot is all of over the place

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    SuouNono May 6, 2021 1:34 pm

    still love the art tho

    Ayi May 6, 2021 2:40 pm

    I was about to comment this but glad you already did.
    The narration was like a novel with the pictures serving as backgrounds. It lacked that ease and tension-less quality of manhwa/webtoon, where the pictures do the narration.

    The jumps from one scene and timeline to another were also confusing. It was like I read multiple chapters of a promo/intro/ch.0.
    It’s like a very, very, very long intro.

    I love the art and story idea though.
    I hope it gets more relaxed and less narrative in the future~~