Denial

LadyinWhite May 8, 2016 11:06 pm

She is so in love with him...she fainted because she went into shock seeing him get hurt..

Responses
    too good May 9, 2016 6:34 pm

    hahaha, i just love your comment ... hahaha...

    CrystalAris May 11, 2016 12:09 am

    I though it was it was connected to her trauma and she heavily blames herself for the tragedies around her.

    She was seriously considering jumping that bridge a chapter ago.

    I curious to see if ch.8 will result in a coma, memory loss, maybe her reverting back to when she was a kid (mental state), quitting her job and becoming secluded, or maybe she will try a suicide attempt.

    Can't wait ^^

    LadyinWhite May 11, 2016 7:08 am
    I though it was it was connected to her trauma and she heavily blames herself for the tragedies around her.She was seriously considering jumping that bridge a chapter ago.I curious to see if ch.8 will result in... CrystalAris

    hmmm..there are so many variables..I am with you I can't wait to see whats next..I wish these chapters came out faster...

    Feyren May 11, 2016 1:40 pm
    I though it was it was connected to her trauma and she heavily blames herself for the tragedies around her.She was seriously considering jumping that bridge a chapter ago.I curious to see if ch.8 will result in... CrystalAris

    I also hope that it will stay that serious. I hate if that trauma is just fastly wipe out as a poor character and plot device.

    CrystalAris May 11, 2016 1:59 pm
    I also hope that it will stay that serious. I hate if that trauma is just fastly wipe out as a poor character and plot device. Feyren

    yeah, some stories do that and ruin a really good plot, just because they wanted to get to the 'good stuff' but if we don't have a good base how will we submerge ourselves in the book... same with movies. Latly they are just action and drama, they need the little tid bits that form the movie.

    Feyren May 11, 2016 2:57 pm
    yeah, some stories do that and ruin a really good plot, just because they wanted to get to the 'good stuff' but if we don't have a good base how will we submerge ourselves in the book... same with movies. Latly... CrystalAris

    And it's really rude to the good character. If character you write about really matters, you actually spend time with her/his problems - because it's what makes the character who s/he is.

    LadyinWhite May 11, 2016 7:36 pm
    And it's really rude to the good character. If character you write about really matters, you actually spend time with her/his problems - because it's what makes the character who s/he is. Feyren

    Exactly..