The old shoujo series stopped when the two main characters got together and I think that's good. Otherwise, you just get bogged down by cliches for length. Still I wanted to see an adult tsubaki, even if it was a photo.
I wonder if the author was afraid of ruining her story by going too far with the relationship. I've seen some good shoujo get....meh when they get together. Like its every other manga. I mean the author could have pulled it off, but maybe she was afraid of doing that
that's what i was thinking too... it's a shame i really feel like the author has been reserved and timid about going far with their relasiotionship
Or they like having stuff left open to the imagination. I kinda like getting to picture it yourself...but I think I'm in the minority there. Or its a little of both? I mean when you are a writer, or an artist, or do any sort of creative activity you learn not to keep messing with stuff...or you can tweak it too much...lol just ask my eyeliner. So maybe she just wanted to quit while it didn't suck. Who knows.
i get it! i know that sometimes when you "tweak" too much it can ruin things but i just feel like kanoko isn't really in love with tsubaki even if i saw their daughter which means they got married and all but when yabuki's friend (i don't remember his name) talked to her and she said she wasn't sure but she doesn't care and puts friendship love and romantic love at the same level it just made me unsure and worried! and i'm not even her boyfriend to worry this much!! i wonder how tsubaki must feel! ( yeah i know he's not real and all but i don't care!!)
Been there, done that, cried. Lol. It could be more developed...it kinda ended with the start of their relationship. She knows she really likes him and he's one of the most important people to her, but it's still being worked on...its just not being drawn out
omg!!! i just pressed annoying on my reply!! damn it! i'm insuting myself now!! i don't think i can take it back!!nooooo!!!
Haha lol Omg thats something I would do
I'm just not satisfied with the ending. It felt rather rushed. I think it really needed more chapters on them dating. I mean Naedoko was still pretty unsure of her feelings when she accepted Tsubaki's confession, so I would've liked more chapters for her to deepen her feelings for him. I expect most shoujo nowadays to go at least 5 chapters or so beyond when they start dating, so I was a little surprised we only got 2. I wanted to know more about there high school lives beyond just there 1st year.