saw raws.. This story is shit

9353g May 8, 2021 5:26 am

just scrolled through the raws & everything happened so quickly. this story is not well written At All, also the rapist guy who kidnapped black haired guy apparently gets a side story. Are you serious.... Dropped this shit..

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    Happyairballons01 May 13, 2021 8:12 am

    No since the side story wasn't lovely dovey at all at some point you can say the rapist got raped back(?)... About the uke getting raped is probably added to make the story longer? As in the author wanted a uke who survived rape and etc. And is trying to open up to a new life a new mind set... We should be glad that the uke is slowly changing thanks to the seme and the seme is starting to understand that people also go through tough times.. Which he wasn't able to completely understand in his father's case. Rape, tantrums, accidents.. Are things authors will add to bring a character down, but then prove that they can live on and find a living like any one.. On a side note the rapist (i think) disobeys his masters orders and was to be killed or fired (?).. And in the end whether it is to be mentioned in the story or not the "rapist" is also handled somehow... Not in the best way but they do get karma in the end and that's proven in many other romances.

    Happyairballons01 May 13, 2021 8:13 am

    Adding the side was only 1 or 2 chapters

    Soti May 13, 2021 11:24 am
    No since the side story wasn't lovely dovey at all at some point you can say the rapist got raped back(?)... About the uke getting raped is probably added to make the story longer? As in the author wanted a uke... Happyairballons01

    I’m so many yaoi stories, the rapists usually get away with it or get a light punishment equivalent to a tap on the wrist. I would love to see one go to jail for their crimes or even get killed.

    Happyairballons01 May 13, 2021 1:43 pm

    Not that i personally know any but i am sure if the story main idea was about rape victims and how they managed life after im 97.9 % sure the rapist was handed into jail etc. Especially bl or romances which take place in the past or so

    Soti May 13, 2021 1:47 pm
    Not that i personally know any but i am sure if the story main idea was about rape victims and how they managed life after im 97.9 % sure the rapist was handed into jail etc. Especially bl or romances which t... Happyairballons01

    I like to avoid such stories so I wouldn't know. I was reading one, Deadlock. They were all in jail. After the uke’s friend got brutally raped, the uke also got raped and that was the end of it for me. Someone said the rapists never really got their deserved punishment.

    Happyairballons01 May 13, 2021 2:01 pm

    Now ofc everyone has an opinion on how to punish a rapist not that im very professional in this field so my way of saying how a rapist should be punished may be different or unacceptable in other people's opinion.. I've been a person to stay away from such cases (as in saying how to punish a rapist or what is rape).. All there's to say is.. We glad the uke made it.. And question why there was a side story.. Or just forget it since its not real.. But that's my opinion.

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 3:55 pm
    Oh?! He wasn’t raped?! I stopped reading it after a while cos I was scared of the angst. But I came back to check if it was safe to pick it back up cos I had already been told that he was only drugged and not... Soti

    Not in the past so im guessing he comes back and rapes him

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 3:56 pm
    Oh my God! It's even worse! I thought it all happened inthe past. What the fuck?! How the hell did the author think his being raped is gonna advance the plot? And then to even give the rapist his own side story... Soti

    So true. The author could have just left this guy in the past. Whats the need of bringing him back after so many years and having him rape the uke????? Thats so disgusting and unnecessary. I hate when authors use rape as a simple plot device

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 3:58 pm
    No since the side story wasn't lovely dovey at all at some point you can say the rapist got raped back(?)... About the uke getting raped is probably added to make the story longer? As in the author wanted a uke... Happyairballons01

    Whats the need of bringing the guy back and having him rape the uke? Rape is such a serious matter for authors to be trowing it around as a simple plot device

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 3:59 pm
    Not that i personally know any but i am sure if the story main idea was about rape victims and how they managed life after im 97.9 % sure the rapist was handed into jail etc. Especially bl or romances which t... Happyairballons01

    Not initially bc he wasnt raped before, she just brought him back to rape him

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 4:01 pm
    Now ofc everyone has an opinion on how to punish a rapist not that im very professional in this field so my way of saying how a rapist should be punished may be different or unacceptable in other people's opini... Happyairballons01

    What i hate even more is that there was literally no need to bring this back. Like just leave that in the past. Seems to me that the author only added that to make the story bigger

    Soti May 13, 2021 4:12 pm
    What i hate even more is that there was literally no need to bring this back. Like just leave that in the past. Seems to me that the author only added that to make the story bigger Ouranaurora

    I heard that most Korean authors like to do that. Apparently, their audience love stories that involve rape in them. I don't know if this is a Korean story but if it is, then I am not surprised. If you want to give a story some angst, you don't need to add rape to it. I have never read a story where I said to myself; “Ah yes, this rape scene was necessary.” Never. You can talk about it without having to show us and even if you want to talk about it, it should be to advance the plot, not as some add-on or an afterthought.

    Soti May 13, 2021 4:13 pm
    So true. The author could have just left this guy in the past. Whats the need of bringing him back after so many years and having him rape the uke????? Thats so disgusting and unnecessary. I hate when authors u... Ouranaurora

    Exactly! I have dropped a lot of stories for this reason.

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 4:31 pm
    I heard that most Korean authors like to do that. Apparently, their audience love stories that involve rape in them. I don't know if this is a Korean story but if it is, then I am not surprised. If you want to ... Soti

    So true. Rape is such a serious thing to be fetichized and used as a simple plot device. There are other ways to advance the plot and build up angst

    Ouranaurora May 13, 2021 4:32 pm
    I heard that most Korean authors like to do that. Apparently, their audience love stories that involve rape in them. I don't know if this is a Korean story but if it is, then I am not surprised. If you want to ... Soti

    I can always think of a way in which the rape scene could have been avoided. Its never necessary

    Soti May 13, 2021 4:53 pm
    So true. Rape is such a serious thing to be fetichized and used as a simple plot device. There are other ways to advance the plot and build up angst Ouranaurora

    Oh yes! This story is NOT one of them.