mmm, the fluid or dream-like sequence of conclusion is so fleeting that i can't even find it satisfying. Compared to it's grounded beginning, i feel like it becomes an illusion, a mind construed conclusion that would create an ideal ending. it doesn't feel "real", as if this wasn't ths actual events that occured.
what even happened to the woman who called her Thenerelle? it couldve been a more dramatic confrontation between her and her savior. triggers could still exists even if she lost her memory, at least in ways that could be beneficial to her characterization. because in the middle of the chaos, she was written off as submissive or less bold and lively just because she became a "woman", like she wasn't even girly to begin with. she had less delicate movements and is brash, bold, and masculine. is it coz she's just lonely? will that make her timid? idk... she felt unfamiliar.
mmm, the fluid or dream-like sequence of conclusion is so fleeting that i can't even find it satisfying. Compared to it's grounded beginning, i feel like it becomes an illusion, a mind construed conclusion that would create an ideal ending. it doesn't feel "real", as if this wasn't ths actual events that occured.
what even happened to the woman who called her Thenerelle? it couldve been a more dramatic confrontation between her and her savior. triggers could still exists even if she lost her memory, at least in ways that could be beneficial to her characterization. because in the middle of the chaos, she was written off as submissive or less bold and lively just because she became a "woman", like she wasn't even girly to begin with. she had less delicate movements and is brash, bold, and masculine. is it coz she's just lonely? will that make her timid? idk... she felt unfamiliar.