The story is good although it lacks some details. The part that's not good ia the common schemes and brainless villains though I love the characters of ML and FL. It will be good to add more details cause I feel that it's too short and to make a more creative matter for main characters to overcome. Still thank u for the story.
PS: The ML is soo hot. I also can't forget how FL met and talked to ML while only wearing undies
The story is good although it lacks some details. The part that's not good ia the common schemes and brainless villains though I love the characters of ML and FL. It will be good to add more details cause I feel that it's too short and to make a more creative matter for main characters to overcome. Still thank u for the story.
PS: The ML is soo hot. I also can't forget how FL met and talked to ML while only wearing undies