"occasional fanservice" ??
I feel the same way that mf writer got way too much screentime which make the readers mistaken him to be the main seme when he is just the villain , whereas the big brother whose the main seme received so much less time...he deserves more screentime with the mc
Yes, something that I dislike but can just ignore and go back to the plot. I won’t be a hypocrite and say I stopped reading / watching something just because rape was used as cheap fanservice, even though it makes me mad — for example, in Sword Art Online there were some really irrelevant rapey scenes done, in my perspective, just for those who wanted to see the female lead being uncharacteristically vulnerable while the hero sweeps to the rescue (hence fanservice), and although I was disgusted by that scene I skipped it and went back to watch the story. I didn’t discard SAO because of occasional scenes like these, even though it was more akin to fan torture than fanservice for me.
Yes, the writer is the kind of villain that gets SO much screen time that there’s no way to ignore him even if you wanted, and even though he had that kind of ending I honestly feel like it couldn’t really get that feeling across of revenge achieved or something, at least not for me. The damage he did was just way too much and for waay too long.
Also he died so easily...he should have suffered much more...the damage & trauma he caused people ugggghhhhh
I DEADASS WAS CRYING WITH THE MC AND THE BROTHER THEIR REALTIONSHIP IS SO SOFT AND SO HEALTHY AND THEYRE SO IN LOVE AND TRUSTING
I went to read the raws.
In conclusion, I feel like this story had really great art and a pretty interesting plot but..... It somehow got drowned on waaaay to much rape and useless sex scenes. There’s just SO much rape. Now, I don’t mind rape when it’s important to the story or even as a occasional fanservice, but MC gets raped by the writer, by his father, has a freaky threesome with the writer and his female lover.... Meanwhile the brother gets raped by his wife while drunk, raped by his schoolmates in a flashback, raped by the writer..... The father also raped MC’s mother, that’s how the sister was born.... It was just way too much! If I lived in this world I would lock all doors and put a chastity belt 24/7.
The main villains (the writer and the father) pretty much torture MC and his brother by the great majority of the story. It’s a really painful read and I feel like MANY scenes were just overused as rape fanservice, kinda squashing the interesting plot on way too much rape. I’d much rather have seen less of the writer to be honest. The romantic and angsty interactions between MC and his brother were beautiful and heart wrenching, so much more interesting than these long, looooooong rape and sex scenes. I was so relieved when the main villains finally disappeared, but for my personal taste, I’d still have preferred if the writer appeared less (I couldn’t give a shit about his appearances, especially his freaky interactions with the MC and all his other lovers, because yeah, this man got massive screen time and there were just tons of scenes where he bangs other people asides from MC. I just kept skimming because that really couldn’t hold my interest).