Liked the Art but the Story Fell Short

Amberwaves June 20, 2016 7:56 am

I really liked how the mangaka drew the characters. Freckles! But somehow the story seemed disjointed and wierdly paced, and suddenly done. I'm not sure why, as it had all the right elements, but they just didn't come together quite right for me. Maybe due the inclusion of the fairy, which, if you think about it, isn't really necessary.

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    Inofrmation June 26, 2016 11:11 pm

    This manga was originally serialized in QPA (a yaoi magazine) two years ago. I imagine she was feeling rushed on that account.