this looks like it was written by 12 years old

Bruh that girl looks like she is 12 years old

Now i can't unsee this....you're so right though....her "trauma" was....idk a bit childish or even immature. Like I'm not saying things people say don't get engraved for a long time in your brain, specially in teens but....come on..., and almost everything else as well masks depth and a decent way of thinking the plot trough...