| this is good imo but there are a lot of unexpected events that happen one a... | 
		
								
			| I need help with a little something! | 
		
								
			| It started really good then it turned into a cluster fuck. The story has be... | 
		
								
			| I feel like this story keeps changing and I have no idea where it's going. | 
		
					     
	 
sad how the plot completely falls apart in chapter 5. if the story had continued on the same line as before chapter 5 this would have been excellent. now it's just another cut and paste romance with no focus