I really hate FL that act like this. At first her motives for what she did made sense beca...

pinkdrink June 7, 2021 4:00 pm

I really hate FL that act like this. At first her motives for what she did made sense because she didn't want her sister to die but now why is she acting like this. She doesn't want to change the course of the story but he already likes her and she likes him. How are you going to act like this over a relationship that hasn't even happened and won't happen? She's using excessive methods to achieve a goal without a just motive. Running away makes literally no sense and the amount of times she's done it too...i-

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    WonderLand June 7, 2021 5:47 pm

    She's not at the point where she likes him openly and her feelings don't match his. He literally kidnapped her, of course she's trying to get away. I think Amy and her sister also have a backstop where they have to run to survive. She also has a point in saying they were only together for a little while and they have been separated for a lot longer.

    Adulcet June 8, 2021 2:22 am

    bitch

    Lonely June 8, 2021 7:15 am
    She's not at the point where she likes him openly and her feelings don't match his. He literally kidnapped her, of course she's trying to get away. I think Amy and her sister also have a backstop where they hav... WonderLand

    Amy and Diana are run away nobles, the reason they were in the forest of night was because they were hiding.

    WonderLand June 8, 2021 9:43 am
    Amy and Diana are run away nobles, the reason they were in the forest of night was because they were hiding. Lonely

    I know, I think there will be a backstory flashback to see why they're fallen nobility soon, probably to reveal why she keeps running away. Can't wait to see them get together though, probably won't happen for a while lol

    pinkdrink June 21, 2021 11:31 pm
    She's not at the point where she likes him openly and her feelings don't match his. He literally kidnapped her, of course she's trying to get away. I think Amy and her sister also have a backstop where they hav... WonderLand

    My criticism falls more towards the author than the character...however it does cause me irritation towards the character. Her feeling will never be on the same level as his because he is traumatized and she became his comfort. Because of that, his feelings will always be greater than her feelings towards him. If her main reasoning was her and her sister's situation, that would make more sense...BUT it's clear that it's not. Her main reason is that she wants him to be happy and she believes that he can only find happiness if he's with serena (forgive me if i spelled it wrong), she breaks the spell, and marries serena. She believes that because of the novel and disregards how he actually feels due to the changes that were made from the novel. On top of all that, she misses him when she's not with him, but then runs away (with excessive brute force towards others) whenever she's with him. It's lazy writing imo. There are a ton of reasons the author could've had her run away and had it make more sense. I've seen some authors do it in other work and it just gets redundant and annoying because the motive doesn't match the actions. The author could've used a much stronger motivation (that would make sense) in order for it to not seem redundant that she keeps doing this. It's like this annoying game of cat and mouse that's been going on for way longer than it should've. Also what he did is 100% wrong and I'm not saying that what he did was okay. It's clear that he hasn't healed from his trauma (his parents & the prince...then getting attached to her bc of the affection she showed him...and then getting abandoned again) and her leaving only made it worse. It would've been nice if there was more communication before she left and overall been given a better reasoning for running bc it's honestly just her obsessing with the original plot.