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I've been too swept up by the manhwa. You made some really accurate critiques. I for one even forgot that she slapped that maid. You're right. It is as if that was a whole other person.
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I've been too swept up by the manhwa. You made some really accurate critiques. I for one even forgot that she slapped that maid. You're right. It is as if that was a whole other person.
Alright, I hope some1 sees this and would just give me a SPOILER.
Also
U Don't don't need to read this long ass paragraph with my ass opinion but anyways
Heres my critic Ngl I didn't like/ or fell in love with this manhwa for some reason, like don't get me wrong I know it's kind of different to some other manhwas out there it's not
~Just this father daughter hate then love relationship which turns to the wholesome family type
~then I guess both ml? And the fl traveled back in time, etc.
But like I just didn't feel it ig like the way I thought I would.
~Firstly I'm just gonna say that I don't hate the ML? But I don't like him either? Like idk why, he's so sweet and helpful to the fL, but like we keep seeing the ML that sometimes I'm like dude can u get off so we can see other characters? And don't even get me started at how everytime they meet they just basically eat together and would barely talk bc we keep seeing the same scene where she would read the FREAKING tombstone
~which put me to my 2nd critic the characters
Like the red hair dude, the mom, and the green haired brother like What are they for? Like really why are they even a character? Like we barely see them especially the green haired brother
~3rd the red hair dude, like where'd u even come from? U have all this man WITH u and for some reason u didn't know that ur dead friend is actually alive somewhere, and ngl I like him for no reason, sketchy but I like him also! Didn't they said they were about to discuss something? Like where is he? Where is all the men investigating the ML? Shouldn't he have some men tell him oh yeah ur friend is being abused by her psychotic family? He was basically just put there either as a replace for her dum dum brothers or to be treated with 2nd male lead syndrome(⊙…⊙ )
~ and lastly [Ngl I have more opinions but I'm too lazy to type it] the fl...... really now? U wanted to give him a tassel bc he won in the actual storyline? What? And somehow they just connect, I thought they didnt even know each other in their past? Everything was fast paced the whole romance thing so idk about that. AND PLEASE GIVE THEM HELL!! THAT'S WHY I EVEN READ THIS THROUGH THE END JUST TO SEE U DO SOMETHING. U HAVE POWERS NOW KICK THEIR ASS, like literally she just slapped the maid and I thought she'll be like that for the rest of the story. Oh yeah she's smart but like when she got her power the fairy literally told her , but for some reason she was still shook when she started seeing diff like girl where's the brain?
~ wait
My last last last opinion is that the story or maybe the panel is a bit of a mess? Idk if it's missing a page or something but the story would go all over the place she had people following her, and then they're for some reason never seen again then for some reason we focus more on this tombstone that she seems attached too and we have no idea why she just went there, let me just read this thing that has been here for so long, but why? Then the whole hunting thing was just so confusing I thought they were waiting for her for the brunch thing, yet we ended up just seeing her wake up, then we have scene Like ichapter 37 when she said goodbye to her mom the dude complemented her first before the mother could even react I'm like wot?
Anyways correct me if I'm wrong I did read this today and caught today as well so, maybe I might have skip an important detail that could've change my opinion about this so please don't attack me just correct me....