I, an intelligent young woman(well versed in romance novels might i add), feel my heart flutter when in the presence of an objectively attractive man, who gives me special treatment and has shown to be concerned for me. I too care about him and wish him the best, though my heart bleeds when i imagine that another woman should be by his side. . . ... Clearly, this must be motherly love!
I do actually like the story, but c'mon, they're all inteligent people in power and the big bad villainess isn't subtle at all (if she was written so badly on purpose, for satirical reasons, i didn't catch it.). I'm sure if the author though about it for a bit, they could've come up with a better misunderstanding between them than this.
I, an intelligent young woman(well versed in romance novels might i add), feel my heart flutter when in the presence of an objectively attractive man, who gives me special treatment and has shown to be concerned for me. I too care about him and wish him the best, though my heart bleeds when i imagine that another woman should be by his side.
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... Clearly, this must be motherly love!
I do actually like the story, but c'mon, they're all inteligent people in power and the big bad villainess isn't subtle at all (if she was written so badly on purpose, for satirical reasons, i didn't catch it.). I'm sure if the author though about it for a bit, they could've come up with a better misunderstanding between them than this.