Responses
I read too many good novel with great plots so I agree with you... The story is okay but too much unclear stuff and plot holes and the the ending is too abrupt to me and it can't make up all of the earlier drama at all ~ but yeah the art is great, it was such a shame... Imma give this 3/5 stars (づ￣ ³￣)づ
[This is just my personal opinion and overall review of the story]
Oh... No no no, I'm dropping this. The story dynamics ruined it all. The plot lines aka plot ideas (alpla x alpha) were good, but whats this? A bunch of plot holes, I don't even understand about Heeyon's choices of acts. The author should've included his points of narration if they're going to write such misconception actions despite appearing as 'strangers' in the beginning of the story. 1 star off for the poor manuscript writing.
Now let's talk about the protagonist, it's just a straight no for me. Who writes a prologue skit as a summary and continues the story based on your SUMMARY. The story should've start from A! Explain one by one about the protagonist's life, mission to accomplish and what problem he has to deal with that awakens this possible love story. It's as if the first chapter is a continuation to a nonexistent prologue aka 'actual' chapter 1. Another star off for the poorly written story dynamics.
On the one hand, the art is good. The anatomy, facial expressions, SFX and backgrounds were all on point. I suggest the author should've added more bubble speech and dialogues that will leave an impression towards the readers.
Otherwise, this story is just 'not for me'. I don't suggest this for those who are looking to read for entertainment. Rather for researching purposes. To those who are speed running their want to read list? Just read the first 3 chapters and you'll see what I'm talking about. I wish I could've read more to see more writing developments from the author, but I'm speed running today. So no.