Am I the only one who thinks the story is kinda messy??? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

MeowMeowBitch June 14, 2021 5:26 am

Am I the only one who thinks the story is kinda messy??? ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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    Cathy June 14, 2021 6:30 am

    No i've been thinking the same it os pretty good but everywhere at the same time

    sheep June 14, 2021 8:33 am

    The art is really pretty, but the story kind of sucks, ngl.

    We're supposed to believe that the ML is falling for the FL for... some reason? Why? All she does is snap at her new little sister and yell at her whenever she touches her. Even with her ability to "know some peoples' pasts and futures" she hasn't done anything particularly interesting or insightful.

    All of the characters are so dull and one-dimensional that I find it difficult to care enough to root for any of them.

    Dumbdelion June 14, 2021 9:29 am
    The art is really pretty, but the story kind of sucks, ngl. We're supposed to believe that the ML is falling for the FL for... some reason? Why? All she does is snap at her new little sister and yell at her whe... sheep

    Yep it's such a shame the story can't perfect the 5 stars even tho the art is real good

    MeowMeowBitch June 14, 2021 1:48 pm
    The art is really pretty, but the story kind of sucks, ngl. We're supposed to believe that the ML is falling for the FL for... some reason? Why? All she does is snap at her new little sister and yell at her whe... sheep

    There's also many things that are messy and wasn't explained carefully