I like this one better then their parents story for some reason.

Makatosbitch June 19, 2021 10:58 am

I like this one better then their parents story for some reason.

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    Peachycream June 19, 2021 11:34 am

    I think maybe this story is a bit feel like umm adventure and a lot of things happen

    Couchpotato June 19, 2021 12:04 pm

    I also like this better. The ML in the story before this was a little bit douchebag (for me). The only likeable charactet there was the FL. In this second installment, at least we can see some "fluff" between the MCs

    Yuushana June 19, 2021 2:05 pm

    Me too. I've been rereading it a lot

    Makatosbitch June 19, 2021 5:19 pm
    I also like this better. The ML in the story before this was a little bit douchebag (for me). The only likeable charactet there was the FL. In this second installment, at least we can see some "fluff" between t... Couchpotato

    Yeah exactly, like I won’t forget that he sexually assaulted her on the first night they married

    steyr June 19, 2021 6:37 pm

    same because in this one there is a longer process to them getting together, and i like the heroine’s motivations better. And I find Alex more charismatic and hot. Noah fence to the parents, i read that story first and really liked it too

    shirayuki June 26, 2021 3:15 am
    I also like this better. The ML in the story before this was a little bit douchebag (for me). The only likeable charactet there was the FL. In this second installment, at least we can see some "fluff" between t... Couchpotato

    I guess that's where his "character development" sunk in. It worked well in the end though, and they're a lovable couple now.