quick review of the story so far

Erys June 21, 2021 12:01 am

OK so I like it The plot is amazing for the same time it’s very messy or it was purposefully made that way like before when I was reading it it took so long to properly get what wanted to be like the plot didn’t want to move along but that could be done on purpose because it’s missing a lot of communication a lot of misunderstandings in her behalf I do understand that she wants to solve things herself but I do hope that she gets to understand emotions because she knows the name she just know what they are and then she tries to fix them herself even though she doesn’t know and it puts people in danger because they could do it better in my opinion I also feel bad because she’s immortal and I don’t know how that’s gonna play out in the future because if she wants died that means because Mr. spirit did remember her and she’s also part blessed of another God to God she’s in the middle Road that she won’t disappear if they forget her but I’m pretty sure she I don’t know if she’s in mortal or she can live a very long time I don’t know but if anything she’ll probably still be alive because Mr. spirit remembered her and the animals remembered her I think that’s how she was still alive

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    ChuYang June 24, 2021 10:26 pm

    Okay it was really hard to read this because of lack of spaces. You don't even need to put punctuation. But there are people who have a condition that makes it even more difficult for them to read when there aren't appropriate breaks.

    And obviously there are not only things that only she can solve but it also isn't her fault if no one believes her.

    ChuYang June 24, 2021 10:28 pm
    Okay it was really hard to read this because of lack of spaces. You don't even need to put punctuation. But there are people who have a condition that makes it even more difficult for them to read when there a... ChuYang

    It's precisely because of misunderstandings too that we know she's the one who understands emotions most deeply.

    Erys June 25, 2021 1:39 am
    Okay it was really hard to read this because of lack of spaces. You don't even need to put punctuation. But there are people who have a condition that makes it even more difficult for them to read when there a... ChuYang

    Understand what you mean I am that person with that condition that would make it hard for me to understand spacing but I also sorry I forgot I’m using text to speech all the time as I cannot spell I kind of forget or become too excited and just press post


    But no I know it feels purposefully messy I do like the story quite a lot it just took me a while to properly get into it because I took a break between reading it and it was a very long break and then I got into it again and It properly attracted me because it usually takes about 3-5 chapters sometimes even 10 to 15 but it didn’t so I was kind of disappointed at first my first go around my second one not so much I love it it’s messy and it looks nice because she’s a child supposed to look messy(〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

    That’s what I meant I was just giving my opinion and recap of the story for myself