uhm. okay. there is the plot?
*where^^
Haha, I was thinking the same thing. I don't mind so much sex, but a first chapter needs to be properly balanced with plot, and this fails.
Yay! Someone who thinks exactly the same! *o*
Right? Honestly, I don't really like the ones that start right off the bat with full blown sex scenes... ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
uhm. okay. there is the plot?