uhm. okay. there is the plot?

Mimiru August 18, 2016 12:55 pm

uhm. okay. there is the plot?

Responses
    Mimiru August 18, 2016 12:56 pm

    *where^^

    lenalena August 18, 2016 2:52 pm

    Haha, I was thinking the same thing. I don't mind so much sex, but a first chapter needs to be properly balanced with plot, and this fails.

    Mimiru August 18, 2016 5:31 pm
    Haha, I was thinking the same thing. I don't mind so much sex, but a first chapter needs to be properly balanced with plot, and this fails. lenalena

    Yay! Someone who thinks exactly the same! *o*

    Erh... August 20, 2016 3:23 am

    Right? Honestly, I don't really like the ones that start right off the bat with full blown sex scenes... ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍