Honestly

Why? reason?

I specifically disliked the first couple (the second was kinda cute nothing more) reasons?
1.I saw no romantic connection meaning their relationship is not going to last and i am having a hard time understand why they are in love
2. Cliché didn't work the rival love thing was out of the bloom the desperate stage was predictable and the sex right after they sort their problems out was also predictable (i know lots of yaoi do this but they didn't do it as boring as this one)
3. Sex was very plain i didn't find it hot or sexy at any least plus the blush was terrible i disliked that part of the art
4. Characters weren't interesting to me (none has unique quirks like super seriousness or jokester or straightforward dumbass)
The only good things are
1. Story wise it sounds like a great idea a gay men with a scent fetish sounds like a good set up for the story.
2.Art wasn't shabby if i saw so myself only downside is the way the author drew the blush other than it it looked great
I hope my reasoning makes you understand why i disliked this yaoi if you want to know my rating it was a 2/5 star

"Art wasn't shabby if i saw so myself " Correction Art wasn't shabby if i SAY so myself

well everyone has their own opinion ╮(￣▽￣)╭

Well I didn't like it too I mean the first couple the second was alright anyway To. T.T

Agreeded

Agreed**

Me too,,, the second couple is okay...
But the first T_T The uke is ..... Grrrrr I'm so mad..

I wouldn't say it's bad. Its just a bit cliche and, I don't know, dull? I still liked it and would read it again if I was bored but it's definitely not among my favorites

You're entitled to your opinion.