As I've remarked myself previously, everyone deserves some good reading experiences. So don't bring the allegations here on us because it's a pure accusation that you're confident — or at least suggesting the idea that all of the readers here own 'no' rights at all. I feel bad for the readers here who do support the authors on the legal platform(s)... Either way, for someone who's in a deep belief similar as you my friend, I will not force my opinion on you, but... Vice versa bitch Somehow I'm not in a good mood today to treat you in an inviting manner, but I hope that you don't blame this human nature of mine as I'm also accepting yours nonchalantaly
Please don't get offended by my speech just now thought mate, my apologies — I'm just that one reader who reads too much villainous isekais;-;
As I've remarked myself previously, everyone deserves some good reading experiences. So don't bring the allegations here on us because it's a pure accusation that you're confident — or at least suggesting the idea that all of the readers here own 'no' rights at all. I feel bad for the readers here who do support the authors on the legal platform(s)... Either way, for someone who's in a deep belief similar as you my friend, I will not force my opinion on you, but... Vice versa bitch somehow I'm not in a good mood today, but I hope that you don't blame this human nature of mine as I'm accepting yours nonchalantaly
Good lord my day couldn't get any better when the replies just double up- Yk what, please spare me today mate
I guess I have to thank the first few kind users who've read my 'essay' because it seems that they convince most people to actually read it till the end I'm glad that my reviews had helped you see things more openly as of now and in the future, thanks•^•
As I've remarked myself previously... Lel, who am I kidding, you're smart enough to understand where I'm getting at. I used "we" and "us" for a reason. You probably know where you went wrong. Have a good shitty day
All it took was for me to call you a bitch, but okay it was entertaining- BUT IM NOT SMART SMART MATE, you're misunderstanding my villainous isekais overdose right here;-;
Yk what, I'm sorry I sound so childish rn. Sorry mate
I searched up how to actually apologize and one of them was restitution/compensating or something like that and well I've been having a bad today like I said, so I watched some funny videos to cheer myself up and I wanna share some to you for spoiling your day. Also, they say psychologically saying sorry is selfish and good for nothing, so yeah...
https://youtu.be/tVQukw8DkaY
https://youtube.com/shorts/VOF4xtH5z0k?feature=share
https://youtu.be/3uQzdlVsLXY
https://youtu.be/bZ7VQ7IyEUY
https://youtu.be/oiBAR8vaAHk
https://youtu.be/ukyC7pu6WmM
https://youtu.be/FpbIGkuzFI8
Well I didnt think you would go that far...thanks
And I didn't expect your reply made it all worth it selecting which to share, but sure anytime... Suddenly I'm shy wtf-
this was.. these comments went from 0 to 100 very fast
unexpected ending
Character development ig?(￣∇￣")
HAHAHAHAHAH
Hello to y'all fellow new readers :D Now, how should I say this... I am a new reader myself today — Well, now it has degraded to 'was' instead. Let's go through one by one of why this story is something I personally would recommend only after my dead body...
The dynamics ack —— Author nim couldn't torture me enough on that one. As a writer and books reviewer myself, no matter the form of story; regardless if it's written as a novel, webcomic or an animation — I can say that nothing will cover up this poor dynamics sadly... (That's how bad it is —) It's awfully inconsistent my friends :'D I can't even tell which character is important because of the inconsistent screen time each character holds. Then as if that wasn't bad enough, the way the author just jumps from one scenario to another resembles the act of dumping a whole bricks leading the readers towards their planned paths 'roughly'.
Take in the idea of; you were reading and trying to comprehend just what in the world is the summary of the chapter you just read, then the author straight up cut the chapter w a rough cliffhanger. It couldn't get any better when the author started the next chapter w a whole different scenario that you literally forgot it was even mentioned to occur two three chapters ago, I — Let's just end that w a star off there...
Now w the manuscript writing... The character information the author write is seriously... Before the idea kills me entirely, just who in the who is — No, rather how do these characters w useless characteristics deserves a whole 10 panels of them getting mentioned into the story — When the important characters the readers desperately needed their introduction and glimpse of back stories only have like 3 panels of their explanatory! Then the story just continues on as if the readers has figured it all out on who and how important their roles are.
I'd like to go on for the sake of the new readers' mental preparation, but as if the idea of me writing a whole criticizing reviews instead of writing my English essay — wasn't shameful enough, *cough cough*.
T o c o n c l u d e , it's dull, confusing and time wasting. If any of you are going against me w a "just let author write however they want —" Hey, not when I've finally found the purposes of my living mate. If you're going to let authors continue writing such poor stories (this applies to any author w poor writings), I can't imagine the future of storytelling mate :D Literally the main purpose of a reviewer is for the author to improve their storytelling regardless forms. Don't hesitate to speak your opinions nor get biased just because something is your favorite genre. You deserve some good reading experiences. But give also give those authors a chance to improve obviously. Even though this story lacks dynamics and manuscript writing, the art is worthwhile. So are the great plot ideas. Though I, personally will no longer be staying for some writing improvements. Just — prepare y'all mentality for the early chapters