11/10 would read again...I think..not
I just scrolled through all the sex scenes just to get to the sorry and boy, was I disappointed. I kept wondering where this story was headed but boy, was I disappointed again when it got over. Saying that it left an empty feeling aren't even the words to describe what I'm feeling right now. But.. I agree with the post. Well author San, good work trying nonetheless. Hope you make better stories next time ! Hang in there. (￣∇￣")
Btw I love this rant. Couldn't have put it in better words..and honestly, I didn't.
get out of my head. there was more backstory with the little brother, who they promptly got rid of and never heard from again. clearly the boyfriend and his ex are or were gangsters, so why no character/plot development there? *deep sigh*
Right ? What was the deal with the younger brother ? Why even have him show up? Makes no sense to introduce him and have him exit like ...no plot development
I agree but like.....most yaois have this kind of logic in their storyline. It's as if all these bad tropes are part of the yaoi genre.
And sadly, all the easy drama it creates is very popular so i doubt it'll stop.
lol not most of the ones i'm reading, so this was a bit of a let down when they started showing up in quick succession in the same manhwa
Well idk but for most long stories,
Theres either sexual harassment/rape
A very low self confident uke and/or
A uke clueless asf
I agree with this to some extent but it's not as extreme as this one. They at least have some sort of a plot. This was ridiculous..I was raging while this guy got into the car and kept talking to the blue hair bitch..for what reason?
I….. what happened? I genuinely think I blacked out during the last 10 chapters… TF IS THIS WRITING???? TF IS THIS STORY???? It’s like they were planning on making an actual story, got bored, and said “I’m sick of this. Hurry up and shove as many of the bad yaoi tropes into the ending as possible to just get this over with.” Like literally what was this story even about? I don’t think I can even recall all the moments I cackled at the sheer ridiculousness of the absolutely horrible writing. Taeho can’t stop meeting up with that blue bitch without notifying anyone despite it being very obvious that he’s tried to steal his man on multiple occasions. He deemed it necessary to meet him in secret to…. Retrieve his phone? Because that’s definitely something you’d need to hide from your partner. Seojun is sitting there silently speculating that his psycho ex might be planning something, so instead of informing his partner that was ALREADY drugged and nearly r@ped by one of his psycho exes lackeys, he has sex with him and then says some vague shit like “don’t get involved. Okay? Okay.” Like bitch??? Also!!!! Why do they have to have 3 rounds of sex everytime they want to get a dialogue bubble off their chest. I’ve never seen so much unnecessary sex in a story that’s SUPPOSEDLY meant to have a plot. Taeho’s dumb ass sits there drinking whatever a stranger hands him right then and there no questions asked, AFTER ALREADY GETTING DRUGGED AND NEARLY R@PED. Talking about some “you have to go to work? Here’s a drink for your energy!”…… that’s weird….. that’s suspicious…… Bitch gets kidnapped, so rather than the bodyguard that Seojun hired to follow Taeho doing his damn job (like he literally said “Boss! Taeho willingly went into a car and now they’re driving away! They haven’t stopped in 3 minutes!!! He must have been kidnapped!!!!” Like okay? Make it make sense), blonde r@pist is the one to inform him that Taeho got kidnapped…. How kind of him…. So why the hell did he go as far as to drug him, tie him up, undress him, let some bitch put his smelly dick on his face, and damn near enter him if he was planning on saving him in the first place? Like “imma save you, but lemme traumatize you first real quick.” And of course, seojun isn’t going to acknowledge the trauma caused beyond stopping his trembling hand and having sex with him because NO DUH! ITS A BAD YAOI! APHRODISIACS TO USE ON UNSUSPECTING, SUPER STUPID AND EASILY TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF, VICTIMS, ARE APPARENTLY MORE COMMON THAN CONDOMS. Not to mention blue bitches sad attempt at being edgy with his whole “I’m so cute and I’m a good actor but I’m also a psycho” like the writing is so bad it’s not even funny. What exactly was his plan? He made it seem like he was planning something big, but all he did was kidnap Taeho, sit there and watch while he was about to be r@ped… and then what? Like what were you gonna do after? Let us in on the plan evil mastermind sir. There are too many things to complain about, so lastly…… Seojun sending someone to “take care of them”? Taeho’s only response being “Jee-willikers. The boss sure isn’t someone to mess with.” Like no… no… the boss is a murder… he just ordered two people to be put to death… that’s never an appropriate response to murder. This story is just… wow… 10/10 would read again.