I have no idea. It's like they wrote the story on a bunch of index cards, and then just threw all the index cards on the floor. I have no idea what is happening where. It just jumps everywhere. It's like nobody walks anywhere, nobody transitions, they're just pop in the middle of another scene. I have no idea who the grandfather was talking to. First the old guy is talking to a lady and then he's talking to a lady with a baby. Pump the brakes.
Tmw you barely notice this until you go back a re-read some parts
It might be somewhat due to reading other stories that do this too, but a lot worse. There was a manga I was reading the other day that is really bad at this and it was like getting slapped in face when the scene suddenly changed completely without any warning, I can't remember what the name of the manga was though
Who knows the org plot?.They didn't describe the org plot that much,all we know about is it has tragic end for our FL's uncle and aunty