This is soooo bad

YourWitcher July 9, 2023 11:12 am

I have so many complaints that i dont know where to start with this one. The story is not cute, it exemplifies the start of a toxic relationship. The ML has soooo many red flags. My girl thinks she can fix him.

He starts getting to her sefl esteem, making sure to lower it every changes he gets, using her disability as an excuse. He thinks every women loves him and cant wait to take him to bed. He humiliates her in a ballroom full of people. He tells her that she cant run from a rape with a leg like that. He takes her cane and forces her to walk with him. He threatens her to tell her secret. He gets mad she didnt give him a prize for keeping his month. He forces her to come hunting and makes her tremble in fear. He makes an insinuation he wants a marriage with her but proposes to her sister. He forces a kiss. He tells her he hopes her bad leg doesnt affect her uterus. And after all that, she kisses him back....

The ML is a manipulative man child and the FL is just stupid. The story could have been better if she hates him with a burning passion for all he has done, but no, lets fuck this up.

No man that likes you will bully you like this. Stop that nonsense and give the FL a brain. No redemption arc is gonna make this ML okay. None. This is not worth reading if you dont wanna get upset.

Responses
    Yuri July 11, 2023 12:49 pm

    The whole point is that it's a "Betrayal of Dignity" on her end, she knows he's shitty but she still loves him, the whole thing is her falling in love with a horrible person against her better judgment,. though I will say by the by the most recent chapter it seems hes just doing things to get her jelly bc he realized that he has come to love her
    Anyways I get not liking this type of story but it literally tells you in the title what kind of webcomic it's going to be so I don't know what you expected
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