So she has been been isolated and abused all her life. Not given enough food or other necessities till now but she is fine? There is not a hint of malnutrition or abuse. Her skin glows, hair is thick and shiny and she isnt emaciated. She has gone without proper contact with anyone for years and yet she has no social anxiety or ptsd?
I know this is a fiction but if you decided to use the abuse trope , a little effort in it’s consequences would have been better. Weak writing imo.
So she has been been isolated and abused all her life. Not given enough food or other necessities till now but she is fine? There is not a hint of malnutrition or abuse. Her skin glows, hair is thick and shiny and she isnt emaciated. She has gone without proper contact with anyone for years and yet she has no social anxiety or ptsd?
I know this is a fiction but if you decided to use the abuse trope , a little effort in it’s consequences would have been better. Weak writing imo.