I read the novel lol 2

Ya_Boi_Gandalf July 22, 2023 8:36 pm

Spoilers part 2:
Since it was late at night I just posted what I could before sleeping, I thought I could go back later and edit it to include the FL and ML but it doesn't work so here we go. Here is the link to the spoilers of the side characters: https://www.mangago.zone/home/mangatopic/14163465/

FL:
ok so basically FL tries to go off course of the original novel but then for weird reasons the events would still happen. She finds out about the author's control over this world after sleeping with the ML, I think after they slept together for the first time ML and her would do it once in a while or when they are in a argument. After that ML starts thinking of her as a hoe because he "seduced" him and she was polite with the blonde secretary guy. They got into an argument so she decided to keep her distance from ML, this way she would "prove" that she wasn't seducing him. ML is dumb AF and did not understand why she was avoiding/rejected him everything he asked her to go out somewhere. After rejection him 10 times in a row he got mad at her about why she was avoiding him and they "cleared" up the misunderstanding? But also because she rejected him 10 times she also passed the second quest that the author made for her. That caused ML to be almost/mostly free from the mind control and other important characters to also be more free from the mind control. From then on ML and FL start to be kind to each other and flirt with each other in front of everyone (even og ML and og FL). This pissed off OG FL/the author so the author tried her best to break them up. Also trying to kill her by leading her to a dark alley where she was kidnapped by a past stalker. Og FL pretend not know where she went and did not bother to look for her. FL's loyal maid was the only one that tried to look for her. ML already had a bad feeling about og FL so he secretly showed up and saved FL in time. Then I forgot why but ML, the dad, and the brother had to leave the estate to fight against a rebellion. So FL tried her hardest to not let the event happen where she is supposed to betray ML while he has gone and let her "family" ambush the house. She also saw og FL acting weird. In the end they got kidnapped and she was tortured by the abusive maid. Then before FL got rap*d og ML showed up to save them all. He DID NOT BOTHER TO LOOK FOR FL and if he did he was planning to have his men kill her because of her family connection. Og FL also tried to make her look back by saying that she did not see FL being kidnapped like them (trying to blame her for being involved) but that was because FL was brought to a hidden room to be tortured and killed. In the end she had to save herself and when she finally got out she saw that EVERYONE has gone/saved except her she thought that since they came to save og FL then ML must have also showed up and abandoned her so she decided to run away before they find and kill her. Luckily she prepared before to run away so she was able to be ok but couldn't find something to treat her wounds of torture so she had to endure a broken ribs/leg and a badly swollen face. As the days passed she saw a lot more wanted posters, but once she got to the boats to leave the country she couldn't leave because past this point she loved ML too much. In the end she decided to get caught, the guards could even recognize her by how badly her face was swollen. ML got mad and disgusted by his family for trying to execute FL due to her family connection. He argued that she now had his last name so she shouldn't be connected/charge with her biological family anymore. Everyone did not see how horrifically injured she was until she was about to be executed. Past this point she thought ml hates her and accepted her death which made ML really upset and sad but it also made her pass the last "quest". Og FL/the author made the last quest to be that FL has to accept her death and with this she had no more control over the characters. ML then managed to get the truth that FL was abused/used and manage to convince everyone that she was innocent. FL then went back into the prison for now and og FL showed up. FL then reveled that she was the author and why couldn't she just die, she then tried to frame FL one last time by hurting herself with a knife. Og ML and ML showed up and ml poked holes/disproved what og FL said. Og FL was then blamed and everyone started to doubt everything she had said in the past. FL told her to get a reality check, that they were not characters in a story anymore but real people. At first og FL did feel bad but overtime og FL just but all the blame on FL instead of facing the facts. FL and ML then as soon as possible moved out to their inherited land. They had a kid and she was excited to develop the land, the people there showed discrimination to her because of the old rumors they heard but loved her over time. She also had a baby boy, once they went to visit ML's family because of the problems og FL was making for them. she accidentally found the royal family's lost cousin or something and brought him with her to the capital. She saw how smart he was so she was thinking of making him her servant (she did not know he was Royalty). Since og FL tried to this is deceive the royal family by giving them a fake, FL asked "forgive" her by making her a nun instead. After some time of comforting og ML for now being single/divorced they went back to their land with the family being depressed for many reasons (as they should, period). She also FINALLY received an apology from og ML and did not see him again until he remarried.

ML:
he's a bit frustrating in the beginning and middle parts but at the same time he was the only one who would try to free himself from the mind control and would take her side. Since he saw FL taking a shower on their wedding night he couldn't help thinking about her so then when she secretly kissed him at night he couldn't hold back his desire, they did it. Since then he got freed a little from the mind control and started to slowly realize how weird OG FL and OG ML are. He got annoyed that both of them were implying that the blonde secretary guy was seduced by FL. That was why he was complementing her work efficiency. He got mad/weirded out that they were implying his now wife's "affair" in front of him. From then on whenever he sees FL and secretary guy together he gets jealous and blames FL instead (cuz of the mind control he blames her for being too seductive instead of the other guy). He had a tea party with og FL and she told him to treat her better bad ask her out to somewhere else. But no matter how much he asked her out he was rejected. He got mad, they talked, and made out. Since then he got more free from mind control so he started to doubt og FL and flirted with FL more too (he wanted to show that since they have a good relationship, she wasn't jealous/hateful of og FL). This pissed off OG FL/the author so the author tried her best to make ML to think badly of her and started to even try to seduce ML!! This just made ML start to FINALLY think bad of OG FL. She would make back handed compliments how she had a very nice curvy (seductive) body, while she was only petite

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    Ya_Boi_Gandalf July 22, 2023 8:48 pm

    I just noticed that it cut off the my spoilers
    Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) here is the rest:

    ML part 2:
    She would make back handed compliments how she had a very nice curvy (seductive) body, while she was only petite and small(ತ_ʖತ). She then basically tried to get ML to say that he preferred og ML's body type then FL'w body type but ML just got weirded out by og FL and confessed that FL was better. At this point he finally admitted that from the moment he saw FL in the bath he couldn't get her off his mind. He also accepted that he had feelings for her and her body was not "seductive" but beautiful. She then went to his room in the middle of the night with "seductive" sleepwear but it was explained (by ML) that it just looked weird on her. Like clothes that don't fit her, she confessed that she actually liked ML but gave excuses why she didn't not get with him instead of his brother. She tried to kiss him but ML told her to go back and that he will pretend that he didn't not hear or see anything, he also found her confession weird because the excuses she made did not make sense. And with each event that happened he just doubted og FL even more. Then once FL, og FL, and ML' mom was kidnapped he saw that his wife was the only one that wasn't brought back. He was both exhausted from coming back from the rebellion and disgusted by his family. They basically tried to convince him to have a feast from the rebellion while HIS wife was the only one missing. From then on he spent his days without rest looking for her before his family find her. He knew there must have been a misunderstanding so he had to hide her before his family find her. He did not see her until she was about to be executed and was absolutely heartbroken to see her condition. He was also frustrated that she would not try to defend herself/rely on him. He ended up proving her innocent. He also proved that in jail she was not the one trying to hurt og FL and hated og FL from then on. He quickly moved with his wife to his inherited land because he thought that his own family was a danger to her. There they had a baby boy (I don't remember his reaction to the baby news or how it happened but he was super happy). He forgave his brother when he FINALLY apologized to them.

    FL's "Dad" and "mom": ok so I don't remember much about her ig adoptive mom but I do remember the dad. The dad is TRASH AND DISGUSTING when FL was younger (A CHILD) he would dress her up prettily and basically almost pimp her out to older men so that hey could support the family or send gift that the family can take and use it themselves instead. The reason he did not pimp her out was because he didn't not want a "damaged bride" to sell in the future. The dad does not like ML's family because he felt that they deserved their title instead of them. The dad was just sorta weird at the end because although the maid confessed? That FL wasn't a "noble lady" but an illegitimate niece instead he KEPT on insisting that FL HAD to die too. Saying that the whole family had to die including her because she is also family, even tho she is the niece. I guess that he hated FL for not being obedient to him anymore and "betraying" them, especially since they were taking pity on her and thinking of letting her be "forgiven" instead of executed. He was so weirdly insistan on FL HAVING to die but I think that might also have been because OG FL was using her last remaining powers to control the situation and make FL die there and then

    If anyone has any questions feel free to ask me

    ᶠᵃⁱʳʸᵇˡᵒˢˢ July 22, 2023 11:59 pm

    i cried so much whenever they spoke of fl's past and experiences with abuse p(´⌒`。q) but it was worth it in the end, so glad that cliff found a partner that levels him and sees him for who he is. FUCK YOU LIZZE

    Bushra July 23, 2023 5:31 am
    I just noticed that it cut off the my spoilers Σ(  ̄□ ̄||) here is the rest:ML part 2:She would make back handed compliments how she had a very nice curvy (seductive) body, while she was only petite and sm... Ya_Boi_Gandalf

    i want to ask what happened to the og fl after she found guilty did they abound her or kill her i wish she suffer

    Ya_Boi_Gandalf July 23, 2023 4:10 pm
    i want to ask what happened to the og fl after she found guilty did they abound her or kill her i wish she suffer Bushra

    Ok so after og FL tried to frame FL of trying to hurt her with a knife in jail the family started to see her true colors. When that happens:

    - ML had no doubt in his mind that og FL is crazy and tried to hurt/frame FL in the past. He was basically disgusted by her and wished her GONE but he also understood that his parents and brother still cared for her so he couldn't do anything. So he just moved with FL to the land he inherited.

    - og ML also knew og FL's true personality for some time. He found out sooner than ML that she was trying to frame and kill FL but even without the mind control he still loved her. Og FL did not believe og ML to really love her true personality so to convince her he signed some sort of contract that he will stay with her forever to prove his love. They rushed the webbing because they did not want anyone opposing to it and also because og FL was complaining about having it as soon as possible. In the end he ends up resenting her after they get married they fight almost everyday, og FL is arrogant to everyone, and she flirts with other men in front of him. He couldn't leave her until she got almost executed for deceiving the royal family so the king broke their contract. It was explained that he never really hated og FL but more like resented and regret everything.

    -the parents after the knife incident felt guilty. They "raised" og FL so they felt it like was their fault for spoiling her. The duke did not see her unless she did something bad and started drinking a lot in his office because of how og FL was splitting the family apart. The duchess was annoyed that after og FL stopped acting she stopped visiting her completely and at parties og FL made the family look bad. She would flirt with men, say stuff she wasn't supposed to, and would degrade other ladies at parties. As time passed they started losing their patients with og FL and were infuriated when when she deceived the royal family because she almost got the whole family killed.

    Ya_Boi_Gandalf July 23, 2023 4:19 pm
    i want to ask what happened to the og fl after she found guilty did they abound her or kill her i wish she suffer Bushra

    If you mean guilty for deceiving the royal family then other then what I already said there isn't anything else. The ending felt super rushed so after og FL and og ML left to their inherited land everything else is from the side stories. It wasn't explained in depth how much they hated og FL but I will say she was delusional till the end. Even when she became a nun she would send letters to her ex-husband (og ML) and strongly believed that she would be saved because she is the protagonist

    Bushra July 23, 2023 5:24 pm
    If you mean guilty for deceiving the royal family then other then what I already said there isn't anything else. The ending felt super rushed so after og FL and og ML left to their inherited land everything els... Ya_Boi_Gandalf

    thats creepy i wish at last she was executed for what she did with fl