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nishinoya July 24, 2023 6:51 pm

First three chapters feel so disconnected to the last three chapters. The thing with the sibling had no importance to the story at all. Seme from chapter 1 is so different from chapter 6 and there was not much stuff to show how he developed as a character. The art is good but the writing is a mess. You can't blame how short it is because a lot of other short manga have coherent plot.

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    Jassiefresh August 14, 2023 12:51 am

    I felt that too. It just felt disconnected after chapter 3. Like what happened to his fantasizing.