This story is so very weirdly paced and like luna especially is so weird, she reacts so weirdly in situations. Anyways idk how I feel it definitely good a s wholesome bht idk i felt like luna was giving heavy plot armour and weak motives. Ingrid was actually overall more interesting but like once again not developed as much. And I don't know how luna fell for the duke as he wasn't nice to her at all until like she for kidnaped or smth. I don't know I just felt like one again if wasn't developed as properly. This story feels like a badly paced one shot.
This story is so very weirdly paced and like luna especially is so weird, she reacts so weirdly in situations. Anyways idk how I feel it definitely good a s wholesome bht idk i felt like luna was giving heavy plot armour and weak motives. Ingrid was actually overall more interesting but like once again not developed as much. And I don't know how luna fell for the duke as he wasn't nice to her at all until like she for kidnaped or smth. I don't know I just felt like one again if wasn't developed as properly. This story feels like a badly paced one shot.