can someone tell me if this is good? i don't care for a convoluted plot as long as it's wr...

ilaya August 2, 2023 10:43 am

can someone tell me if this is good? i don't care for a convoluted plot as long as it's written well

Responses
    Cruchy_rollers August 2, 2023 10:48 am

    This story is absolutely amazing, your should definitely read it!

    ilaya August 2, 2023 7:52 pm
    This story is absolutely amazing, your should definitely read it! Cruchy_rollers

    and I won't tear my hair out because the characters have very 2d writing?

    Cruchy_rollers August 2, 2023 9:38 pm
    and I won't tear my hair out because the characters have very 2d writing? ilaya

    No?

    ilaya August 3, 2023 3:24 am

    okay good thank you(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    HELPMELMAO August 3, 2023 12:57 pm

    at first its quite yada yada but it depends on how you take it, me personally, loved every single bit of it, ITS WORTH THE READD

    ilaya August 3, 2023 6:11 pm
    at first its quite yada yada but it depends on how you take it, me personally, loved every single bit of it, ITS WORTH THE READD HELPMELMAO

    i just like mature plot (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
    OK OK WILL READD

    HELPMELMAO August 3, 2023 9:22 pm
    i just like mature plot (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づOK OK WILL READD ilaya

    YES YOU GO GIRL

    Stell August 4, 2023 12:16 am
    and I won't tear my hair out because the characters have very 2d writing? ilaya

    what do you mean by 2d writing?

    ilaya August 4, 2023 3:22 am
    what do you mean by 2d writing? Stell

    you know, when an author forces a character to stick to a certain stereotype no matter, for example- the author choose the archetype: "pale & lightskinned beauty who looks like a girl but is not a girl and is forgiving no matter what the seme does" uke and is just reinforced throught the manhwa- where the uke forgives AND EVEN FALLS IN LOVE with the seme even after he did something horrible like uhhh rape him

    VictoVictoVicto August 4, 2023 3:47 am

    I honestly kept waiting for it to get better and it hasn’t

    VictoVictoVicto August 4, 2023 3:48 am
    you know, when an author forces a character to stick to a certain stereotype no matter, for example- the author choose the archetype: "pale & lightskinned beauty who looks like a girl but is not a girl and ... ilaya

    If you don’t want to read something like this don’t read this manga hahaha

    Inkkk August 4, 2023 4:49 am

    It's not that worth it. It's just sex and tress, the uke can't take a break because the mls are jerks. If you're bored, go ahead. But don't really expect a good good plot.

    HELPMELMAO August 4, 2023 10:02 am
    I honestly kept waiting for it to get better and it hasn’t VictoVictoVicto

    well i mean, right now is the climax of the plot

    ilaya August 4, 2023 12:06 pm
    If you don’t want to read something like this don’t read this manga hahaha VictoVictoVicto

    girl what ??
    I'm asking if it's written well
    ofc I won't read it if it's bad wtf

    ilaya August 4, 2023 12:07 pm
    It's not that worth it. It's just sex and tress, the uke can't take a break because the mls are jerks. If you're bored, go ahead. But don't really expect a good good plot. Inkkk

    okay THAT'S THE REVIEW I NEEDED. thank you
    i hate plots like this
    you saved my time