Oh look, more lazy trash plot. She didn't need a fucking hero, disgusting. This belittles ...

S-J-M August 7, 2023 3:46 pm

Oh look, more lazy trash plot. She didn't need a fucking hero, disgusting. This belittles her whole story, her pain, her vengeance. What about the princess they saved and the person who helped her change bodies, and Nathan, literally the whole plot is trashed so Prince can fuck her. (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸

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    S-J-M August 7, 2023 3:54 pm

    I'm learning from this that I can't do smutt without plot what's happened to me lol

    Salad with tomato August 7, 2023 11:06 pm

    Well technically the whole plot wasn't really trashed since this is just an alternative ending that can be skipped and should be read as such for those rooting for Van instead. It ended with Blaine marrying her.

    S-J-M August 7, 2023 11:10 pm
    Well technically the whole plot wasn't really trashed since this is just an alternative ending that can be skipped and should be read as such for those rooting for Van instead. It ended with Blaine marrying her... Salad with tomato

    Eh, I know it's skippable. Doesn't mean it's good. Literally in terms of story, and I know its JUST an alt end, but it is just about him getting her through sex and throwing his weight around. It's unsatisfying for me, and I have every right to mention that ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ I loved her character and her ruthless methods. She wasn't the type to allow ANYONE to do something that big for her, especially not knowing her and her reasons. Vengeance would feel kind of empty I think.

    Salad with tomato August 7, 2023 11:14 pm
    Eh, I know it's skippable. Doesn't mean it's good. Literally in terms of story, and I know its JUST an alt end, but it is just about him getting her through sex and throwing his weight around. It's unsatisfying... S-J-M

    I mean yeah I didn't say u don't have the right to mention that and I myself like Blaine more. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ since it seems a bit one sided from Van. It took her much more time to kinda get together with Blaine and figure each other out. While this just feel a bit. Rushed. But then again. At least it's alternative and not the final ending ( ̄∇ ̄")