This story went sooooo downhill from the initial premise. I can see that the author is try...

後輩じゃない ^_−☆ August 30, 2023 11:04 pm

This story went sooooo downhill from the initial premise. I can see that the author is trying to tie up all loose ends but it’s so unnaturally paced.

Remember when this was a story about a guy who magically came pearls? I was hoping it was gonna end with him being part mermaid or something fantasy-like. Not the thousand different directions it took instead.

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    toilet terrorist August 30, 2023 11:14 pm

    its like doing meth, herione, cocaine, crack all at once and trying to wash it down with juice

    spicychocolel#0000 ❤ August 30, 2023 11:40 pm
    its like doing meth, herione, cocaine, crack all at once and trying to wash it down with juice toilet terrorist

    yeah…

    Myezer August 31, 2023 12:05 am

    Man Fr because why he just cumming pearls .

    Disi August 31, 2023 12:24 am

    And they still haven't answered WHY HE COMES PEARLS?! I just want to know the answer. It better be in the epilogue, otherwise what's the point of the whole story?

    Slayeon August 31, 2023 5:29 am

    To be fair zoy left and she is the one who wrote the original story so inking had to take over writing + art and clearly she didnt know what she was doing

    後輩じゃない ^_−☆ August 31, 2023 5:41 am
    To be fair zoy left and she is the one who wrote the original story so inking had to take over writing + art and clearly she didnt know what she was doing Slayeon

    This makes soooo much sense!!!

    Myezer August 31, 2023 8:36 pm
    To be fair zoy left and she is the one who wrote the original story so inking had to take over writing + art and clearly she didnt know what she was doing Slayeon

    Dang why….she ruin everything

    toilet terrorist August 31, 2023 8:41 pm
    To be fair zoy left and she is the one who wrote the original story so inking had to take over writing + art and clearly she didnt know what she was doing Slayeon

    WHATTT, NO WONDER THE STORY IS GOING TO SHIT

    toilet terrorist August 31, 2023 8:42 pm
    WHATTT, NO WONDER THE STORY IS GOING TO SHIT toilet terrorist

    or well, went to shit*

    spicychocolel#0000 ❤ September 1, 2023 12:23 am
    To be fair zoy left and she is the one who wrote the original story so inking had to take over writing + art and clearly she didnt know what she was doing Slayeon

    what does u mean by they left?

    Disi September 1, 2023 12:50 am
    To be fair zoy left and she is the one who wrote the original story so inking had to take over writing + art and clearly she didnt know what she was doing Slayeon

    Ooooh, that explains alot. Yeah, that would be hard to do, and by the looks of it there wasn't a full story outline left for them.
    I really do like how the art ended though. Especially the ML's glow up. Didn't he have a bowl cut at the beginning?

    Slayeon September 1, 2023 5:31 am
    what does u mean by they left? spicychocolel#0000 ❤

    She quit writing the story so inking had to take oher writing. Originally zoy was the writing author and inking was the artist author

    Slayeon September 1, 2023 5:32 am
    Ooooh, that explains alot. Yeah, that would be hard to do, and by the looks of it there wasn't a full story outline left for them. I really do like how the art ended though. Especially the ML's glow up. Didn't ... Disi

    Yeah the art got soo much better too bad the story couldn't keep up