ch 30

YukiTaka September 19, 2023 9:36 pm

Idk, man. this manga is really not my cup of tea. from weird cuts and expressions tht make sense by itself but somehow interrupt the flow of narration when put together as if its just random expressions put together in webtoon format. how do I explain, like one moment the uke's being angry, next moment he's being shy and blushing. like bro, u were just angry y r u blushing. id rather u looked red cuz u were pissed or not cuz u were feeling bashful all of a sudden after claiming u hate him.

Plus the overused plots.
(i really don't mind reading cliche plotlines. heck, I search for them, but this one really messed up the narration. somehow the flow and everything seemed weird)

like stabbing urself when u cant control urself. urgh, somehow it didnt look genuine at all. as if kang's just doing it to show off how he wants to respect uke n his boundaries n decisions but then next moment he's pouncing on him anyway cuz apparently its fine cuz he was not the one in rut in the first place, it was the uke in heat.

urgh. maybe the scene was supposed to be more serious but wth, why do u look so goofy n fake like u r just doing it fr the sake of it.

and whts up with his family too. the sister claiming the seme still has parental rights and all. agrghhh, tht shit pissed me off too. i understand she's right n played an imp role in solving the misunderstanding but whts with the scene transitions. there's no depth to the characters, they just think up some dialogue n say some dialogue without any charcter background. the dialogues also somehow r not adding anything to their personalities.

the characters keep changing personalities or are just not consistent in the first place. our seme Kang, is somehow an intern doctor, a company worker and a kindergarten teacher at the same time according to the plot needs. and the 'emotional' scenes are sudden and don't evoke any emotion. the touching n awkward undressing. I cant.

i'm already at ch 30 so maybe I'll force myself to read the rest cuz I don't like leaving mangas half read when it's marked completed but im not really expecting it to get any better. maybe i'll come to a conclusion but so far i dont really like any of the characters other than taeyang. the only reason being she's cute.

Responses
    Catarina September 20, 2023 4:56 am

    lmao I remember reading this manga years ago and literally saying "what the fuck he's a doctor and works at company and also is a teacher at a preschool while also being on the board of it???" hahahahaha

    I.Need.My.Daddy September 25, 2023 2:43 pm

    Same. I can't stand with the plots and their expression.