
cool, sorry if I sent this a million times, my side is buggy. I want to know what you think of criticizing this story. Are the characters flat? are they doing things to service the flow of the plot?
I''ll add my two cents.... From my perspective as a character writer, the characters are one-note dimensional so far. Jae is an ass and an abuser and we have only been shown his other side once, that is bad writing. Dan hasn't really been a character since chapter 25 and is taking a back seat. The disturbing content in the chapters are just there to exist and does not show anything meaningful to the plot yet, creating a marketable shock factor. that is bad writing.
For example, I enjoyed sadistic beauty ( not the ending that was dogshit) but it showed meaningful characteristics of the characters in an abusive setting where cause and effect move the story along, that was some decent writing. The latest bits of Jinx from a story writer's principal's have not been strong and the same problems rung true with bj Alex. Mingwah is not a strong writer, or at least she isn't writing strongly right now with this material.
And stop reading if you hate it to the point of insulting the creator over a fictional character.
No one is holding you at gunpoint to read a series that was problematic from the jump.