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Honestly, I don't really have any problems with how fast it is, since I don't really have any problems with that in general. I guess I just got used to all those slow burn stories ive read. Though I do still feel like somethings icking me with the story. But eh, I just wanted to see some smut... and the Beefy bottom...
Rightt i love beefy bottoms
Valid criticism and take, I genuinely agree as this story is touch and go for me. But like you said, love the pairing...
Love the pairing, always down for Muscular Beefy Bottoms with Damn Big Juicy Azz Titties. Bonus points if the Top is Slender, or Pretty in general. But the story just wasn't for me. Had potential really, cool superpowers shit, just felt fast like everyone said. But hey, at least I get to see another Beefy bottom.